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The baby blue sky illuminated
Our bruised and breaking hearts
I traced an x over it
With pale, slender fingers
"Did you know that I could save you?"
The suits of red and black caressed
Our emaciated and disapating figures
We waltzed in circles
With careless, charming movements
"Did you know I could kill you?"
The dull fluorescent light discoloured
Your shocked and gasping body
I buried you alive
With cold, unforgiving glances
"Did you know it's Thursday Afternoon?"
The blistering golden sun lightened
Your mussed raven tresses
I kissed you dead
With soft, subtle lips
"Did you know it's love?"
©2005-2009 ~hazyxeyes
:iconhazyxeyes:

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I have weird perception of "love"....

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:icon42kitty:
sweet poem

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Finding hurt
Finding Pain
Finding everything insane
Living life day by day
Walking alone each step of the way
:iconhazyxeyes:
Thank you!

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~oopsidiedstock -Me and Superstitious13's Stock
:iconfaded--soul:
ooh!! i love this :) the style of this is awesome.. and your perception may be weird, but i love it still! lolz, well done love!

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*hugz and kissez*
[.faded.soul.] Rayna
:blackrose:
".tease.me.more.please."
:iconshutterbug13:
i really like it, i don't know why but something about it.

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Meghan
I have found freedom
...losing all hope is freedom
:iconprisoneroftomorrow:
no i love it,... lol i do know why haha Vecause tis grand, and so is the maker..you

--
Give a mouse a cookie, he'll want a glass of milk!

<kate is just a simplistic girl with bruised knees>
<java is kates inner handicap>
:iconprisoneroftomorrow:
HONKHONK

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Give a mouse a cookie, he'll want a glass of milk!

<kate is just a simplistic girl with bruised knees>
<java is kates inner handicap>
:icon42kitty:
no prob

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Finding hurt
Finding Pain
Finding everything insane
Living life day by day
Walking alone each step of the way
:iconsuperstitious13:
*grabs heart, twirls on the spot, drops dead* VIVIKE! This is amazing...I don't know why but I'm absolutley 100% in love with this poem...brava*bows*

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i Love You<3. Period.
-The China Doll

*~ChinaDolls13=Mine and =shutterbug13's joint photography account*

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